1. Announcing the mean and standard deviation of the standardized data set
1 mark, and the concluding question misses the pointWhat not to write
"After standardization, the mean is and the standard deviation : the group is therefore homogeneous."
What to write
"The mean and standard deviation are AUTOMATIC: every standardized data set has them. Homogeneity is read from the standard deviation of the RAW data."
Why: Standardization is a construction: it manufactures these two numbers by definition. A result that you would get on any data whatsoever is not a result.